Student writes

I think Mongolia will be more different than now by 2050. Every thing will have changed. Perhaps we won’t be using car, or maybe we will be one of the strongest country all over the world.

Mongolia will be more developed than now by 2050. Also people will more educational than now. Many big cities will be built. There will be no air pollution because we will be using new car which uses solar and electric power. Many nuclear station will be built. Influence of computer in life will reach its highness. Everybody will be using computer, so working will be much easier than now. Mongolia will be more successful in science. A Mongolian will won the Nobel Prize. Space exploration will become increasingly popular, so we will have invented our own spaceship and satellite.

Education will have changed a lot. Every children will be using computers in their lesson. They will take lesson by internet at home, so they won’t have to go school. Contents of lessons will have changed a lot too, because children won’t need to take mental arithmetic. They will need to learn using computer programs and languages.

Unfortunately, our environment will be in risk. Most people will be living in east of our country, because west coast will be like a dessert. Many types of animals and plants will be in extinct. They will be character which appears in fairy tales. Water will be more expensive, because there will remain very little water resource. Altai-tavan Bogd will melt because of world heating.

Most people worry about the future. No matter how dark it may seem, it is up to us look after our country and try to make it a better place to live.

Working with the teams: Reading & Writing

Pay your attention!
Wrong: the Mongolia, i
Correct: That's why..; This place is located..; some planets; will be using ..; will have made..; from place to place; It will influence on ..; write about..; First place we visited was ..; underwater..; There will be no sick people; ingredient ; to be connected..; will predict = foresee; will be polluted..; be healthy..;